tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6035292903521753682.post5659331906018240662..comments2011-03-20T22:37:36.148-05:00Comments on Gen's Fanfiction: Secret Identities Chapter 21Genevievehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14903883525733874794noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6035292903521753682.post-64036060683423776152011-03-03T02:02:55.958-06:002011-03-03T02:02:55.958-06:00Wow, I just love your stories!!! I think at first...Wow, I just love your stories!!! I think at first when you jumped into a new chapter I was like, wait, back up, where are we. Then I kept reading and I was like oh okay maybe I am getting sleepy lol! I love the imagination you put into these. I do notice that you really play on Chloe's healing ability. Which is something I questioned all the time on the show. Why it suddenly vanished after Brainiac. Or was that even before that occurred. Anyway this story was brilliant. I was actually wishing for more if you can believe it! I was like that's it? Oh come on, more pretty please! You have an amazing knack for keeping the characters relatively similar like Clark, and Chloe. I think this is the only thing I grimaced at, but your story needed it (hints of Chlark). The natural progression that Clark came to I think made it believable for Lois later to realize the depth of feelings Chloe and Oliver have for each other. It's not easy doing that in so many chapters and I commend you on an awesome job! I will do my best to comment, and trust me I love to spell out the details to stories I do read and like. Sometimes I do chapter by chapter, if I can. But ultimately you will get some from me. I seriously think you have an amazing gift as a writer. And if you were one of those writers, we would have had Chlollie a long time ago and have Chloe still there. I guess with more money, bribery maybe? Nah just kidding. Awesome story...on to my next...well later today that is. LOL :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6035292903521753682.post-73476052832306950802009-05-19T20:05:03.175-05:002009-05-19T20:05:03.175-05:00Thanks so much! I think they'd have the most beau...Thanks so much! I think they'd have the most beautiful blonde babies! So glad you enjoy my stories, and I appreciate that you took time to read and leave your thoughts. :)Genevievehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14903883525733874794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6035292903521753682.post-80032591991022323522009-05-19T19:56:42.286-05:002009-05-19T19:56:42.286-05:00I love your stories! I like that i have found some...I love your stories! I like that i have found someone who thinks that Oliver and Chloe should be together also. I love stories with them having a baby. Thats how i hope the 9th season will go that they will get together because jimmy is gone now (no loss there) and fall in love and have chloe have a baby. Every other show has a bastard child y not smallville lolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com